I like your poem, it's very I don't really know what word to say and I like it is a really non-helpful adjective. But, it just hit me well you know? I think the thing I liked the most is your rhythm can't be picked up by reading it silently or at least not by most people which is something I can definitely identify because it's something that happens with my own poetry. But it's definitely there, and it's very nice too, it's fantastic actually once you catch it. And what the words are saying are a very good encompassment of the book as well.

-sqwee- I like it. It describes Lestat to T.

Love the ending.