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| sfh09 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseLove it |
| Charmed Melody 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this guy who wants to date you sounds like a complete jerk! You can find better I'm sure, I think there's a club of guys who act like this I've met some. But moving on, loved the expression of emotion in this very well written :) |
| purplepants 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abusesounds more like prose than poetry. try using a metaphor to better communicate your point next time. keep at it. |