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| DemonicTruths 2007-04-25 ch 4,   | Yay, you updated! Pretty name for the...thing. I can hardly wait to see what the doc wants to say. Update soon. |
| Jackaroe 2007-04-05 ch 3, | *SQUAWKS* HOW CAN YOU NOT LIKE THIS CHAPTER! It was so touching. I loved the repetition of the beginnings of the paragraphs. And the last line ties up everything nicely. It gives the reader a complete background and understanding of Anna's life before she got voices in her head without going on and on with chapters. I like this. I like this a lot. Oh, and if you want, I could make a little button for your story. That way, you could get more promotion. ^_^ Cheers, and update soon, dagnabbit! -Jackaroe |
| DemonicTruths 2007-04-04 ch 3, | O, sad life. Intersting chapter though. Update soon. |
| Sally Can Wait 2007-03-27 ch 2, | I really liked it! Like, seriously. So many voices-in-my-head stories are superdramatic and therefore not very believable, but you protagonist actually has a REALISTIC voice, even if she's going through something that could potentially be hard to relate to. :O Update soon! -Sally Can Wait |
| DemonicTruths 2007-03-25 ch 2, | Ah! Don't die! What's gonna happen next? She's not gonna die right? Update soon. Sorry I didn't review yesturday, f/p wouldn't let me. |
| Jackaroe 2007-03-22 ch 1, | I've been wondering if "She" has a name. I'm guessing she does (or will) and, like I've mentioned on the boards, I love this story already because it's entirely unique and I will go mad if you do not update this story soon! |
| DemonicTruths 2007-03-21 ch 1, | Great beginning. Anna seems really confused. Shannon and Lily are such bad friends! They should die! Haha, just kidding. Update soon. |
| grasping.for.sanity 2007-03-21 ch 1, | great story! |