|Reviews for vanity|
| classic violet 3/27/07 . chapter 1
short and sweet. adore the title.
'i wish you would
leave behind the
weight that keep
that especially was amazing & spectacular.
| she smolders 3/22/07 . chapter 1
The last verse is such a sad one. Oh, and I think you meant to say "keeps", not "keep". Otherwise, this poem is lovely in its simplicity.
I'm happy that I'm able to read your poems again. It feels good to start over. :)