Reviews for Where Dreams Come True

RynDevien 2007-06-17 ch 8,	AH! I can't even think about any little errors in this. I'm too excited about what happens next!
RynDevien 2007-06-16 ch 6,	um ok for some reason it won't let me review on chapter 6. It says it's out of range or something. Anyway consider this a review for chapter 6 which is good!! The only part that was confusing was when they went in the white and black checkered room and ended up at their front door?? If you describe that a little better it should work. The end... omgosh! It's so romantic!! (lol I'm hopeless) You write that kind of thing so well! And it's so simple, too (as in it doesn't move too fast). Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter very much and can't wait to read more!
RynDevien 2007-04-08 ch 4,	This is very imaginative. That is definitely not a bad thing. It's a good story, and I'm very interested as to what will happen next. It's kind of funny too, and not idiot humor. Good humor. It's subtle. However, it does have some grammar mistakes. You do have a great vocabulary as far as I can tell. Mostly commas and stuff. I have that problem too lol. By the way, somnolent is a cool word. I'm not sure if I've heard it before.
dotcult 2007-03-26 ch 1,	please include a description of Macrophage Syndrome in your next chapter's author's notes. it's quite difficult to research online and you made me very curious