Reviews for The Heaven I Found in Hell

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Kia Tarj 2009-09-12 . chapter 1

I have to say that I'm not entirely sure what the big deal with models and their weight is. One of my best friends is a model (she's not a big-time Paris runway model, but she has modeled in New York for major companies); she's 5'6" and weighs somewhere between 120 and 130, I believe. And she eats like a pig. xD

I'm not bashing your story, I'm just trying to point out that not all models are dangerously underweight girls who have no appetite. I really am enjoying your story and it doesn't take a big suspension of disbelief; I realize that my friend may be unusual. I just thought I should point it out. =)

Kia Tarj

carmen 2009-08-07 . chapter 25

I feel like I just wasted 2 days reading this.
It kind of held my interest, but it wasn't all that entertaining.
And I didn't like the fight.
It was just like all of it was halkf done.
The emotion was underplayed in everything
Plus when you skip months, it leaves a lot to be lost.
You wrote "We grew closer"
but because the readers didn't get to experience that, they don't feel that they are closer.

animegirl214 2009-07-31 . chapter 25

oh~ that was so cute! :D :D
i loved it! thanks for the wonderful awesome story!! :D :D :D

Loved For Who I Am 2009-06-07 . chapter 24

Okay the most MAJORLY CUTE STORY EVER!

DreamBee4 2009-05-19 . chapter 25

I read this story from the very beginning, and loved every second of it! The only thing that saddened me a little was the fact that Cindy was no longer in the story towards the end. I would have liked to see her 'happy ending' too. Other than that it was amazing. I really loved the relationship that Alex and Nate had. It was adorable.

I Murder on Impulse 2009-04-30 . chapter 25

Aw such an amazing story!

xx

cope 2009-03-18 . chapter 25

This was predictable for the most part, though there were a few subtle twists that made things lively. I have to say, though, that I really disliked Alex’s character. I’m not sure exactly what she was, but she came off as fake and completely unrealistic. Actually, most of the characters were like that to tell the truth. I realize that there are people who live the ‘high life’, I have watched Laguna Beach, but your characters were so perfect even in their character laws. You covered the majority of the clique bases in them, each having that one major flaw that was their burden to bear. As weird as this may sound, it reminded me of the characters in Little Women – they had their vices but each only had one particular one that never changed.
If you were ever to write this, I would suggest that you draw from people that you know well, or at least are constantly around, and meld them into your characters to make them seem as though they could be real people.
That being said, I did really enjoy reading your story, even through the insanely vapid parts. If there were ever to be a sequel, I would be sure to read it as well.
Keep writing.
Yours truly,
cope