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Reviews For: Her Celtic Cross

snowdance-lyghtning 2008-04-21 ch 1,	I have two things to say: 1) This was HOMEWORK?!?! And 2) Nice opening. The cliffhanger of a dying person's thoughts really give the story a sick and twisted oppening. The description is good and the story really moves along. I was also shocked at the ending. I can't belive they DIE! I don't have any complaints or suggestions, so good job!
dragonflydreamer 2008-04-19 ch 1,	Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathan! (link on profile) Amazing story! The title is what caught my eye, and although it wasn't exacrly what I expected I was immediately hooked. Your descriptions are amazing! Another review already mentioned this, but the line "I couldn’t believe I was mourning for a person who was still alive." was beautiful. It would have been nice if you added a bit more about Caroline, though. Overall, great job!
Twilight Starr 2007-11-27 ch 1,	Great story. Interesting title. Wonderful job! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~
Zeela Ravena 2007-03-24 ch 1,	"I was morning for my friend before she died." Very cool, nice job with the over all shape of the story as well. Keep writing and you will only get better.
Chubstermcchub 2007-03-23 ch 1,	WOW Fizz that's incredible how un-earth did you write that? WOW is all I can say!
Stella-Polaris 2007-03-23 ch 1,	Woah! Such a good story! Please review both Dreamcatcher. Otherwise, I spent the time for nothing =[
Kay Elliott 2007-03-22 ch 1,	Awesome story; Great plot line. My only suggestion is that you make it longer and maybe throw in some more descriptions. But in general it was really eye catching.
Blue Drifter 2007-03-22 ch 1,	This was great! It was spooky and really morbid. You have a grat sense of detail and some creepy descriptions. I loved this, it was so well written. What kind of english class do you take that let's you write stuff like this? I wish I had the same class!

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