Beautiful and sad. I really like it.

Intersting...is all I can truly say. (But still good. Lots of feeling)

Ah, no fair, you know me too well. It's ok though, since I have no idea about fate either. I was talking about it to a friend the other day who doesn't, but I just can't be sure. I don't think it matters. Your poem was beautiful though. I was especially caught by, "Turning the white, pure moon into a monster,/and the blue, blue sky into black charcoal." Wonderful job, and as always God bless.