 relapse into change 2007-12-02 . chapter 1i really like this
the title really caught me for some reason
anyway good job it's truly is a beautiful poem |
 Charlotte Makepeace 2007-04-28 . chapter 1Beautiful job. I love it... It's funny how something as usual as soap can mean so much as a trace of something (someone) gone. (I love all your other poems as well.) Keep writing :-) |
 Chantilly Lace 2007-04-02 . chapter 1I love it. I love all of your poems... they are so beautiful, simplistic but powerful. This one is a favorite. I love how you used such a meaningless gift as soap to capture the longing for someone-- insignificant objects that remind you of that person seem to take on meaning and importance when you miss them. So sad. |
 little smiles 2007-03-27 . chapter 1Thanks for your review on my story, I really appreciate it :)
I love this little poem. You can really feel the sense of longing, sadness, and the sense of looking back. It's beautifully written. |
 Tytherpol 2007-03-25 . chapter 1Oh gosh I love this. |