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| Jasrey Blue 2008-03-04 ch 3,  | abuseWell that was my favorite. The "girl detective". I hate those stories. |
| Jasrey Blue 2008-03-04 ch 2, | abusePerfect. |
| Meilee 2008-01-14 ch 3, anon. | abusehaha! so funny! keep updating! |
| Lil Chubb Rocket 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseFreakin funny! Write on!! |
| Tasha Lee 2007-11-11 ch 2, | abuseMore, please. :D |
| Clover Greenwood 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseHahaha that's pretty good! Certainly made me chuckle =] I especially like the descriptions, like "orange and gold, like a diamond on fire" Keep up the good work! |
| shadowcat86 2007-06-13 ch 2, | abuseWhat made you decide to continue? Oh well, either way I liked this one a lot better than the first chapter for some reason, although I wish I could tell you why. |
| Cella N. 2007-06-13 ch 2, | abuse-snerk- Poor Tom. I feel really sorry for him. Jobs as rutine-attached as those often get on your brains, don't they? For some sick reason, though...I was giggling at the end. "Opsies!" |
| Cella N. 2007-06-13 ch 1, | abuseHere I am! Very humorous, I liked it. Amusing, made me giggle. I like how you overlap her writing, her fantasy and the reality all together. Worth a great giggle, thanks so much. |
| sarah1491 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseooh, nice story. i like the use of italics too! |
| Jasrey Blue 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was hilarious but you could have added more to it. |
| SadHappyFace 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abuseLOL. Awesome. Seriously. HAhaha. I love this. |
| Lex Anderson 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI can say, as a former cashier/bagger, that old women are one of the few things I didn't make love to on a conveyor belt. The last line almost redeemed what was pretty much a predictable romantic fantasy comedy story. |
| Erisah Mae 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseHeheh. I like it I like it a lot. It's a real shame these Harlequin Romances don't happen in real life... Then again, while the whole "getting a man" deal would be far easier, the world would suddenly become even more complex with all of the bloody love triangles! Nice work. Erisah |
| Rae Bauer 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseLoved every line of it! Although I am somewhat confused as to if she was reading a romance novel about love in the check-out lane, or if the check-out lane situation was simply going on in her head. Either way, it was excellent. |