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| Love in Light 2007-03-22 ch 1,  | I really liked the subtle rhyme. I can't comment on the emotion, because I don't feel this. However, my friend just had to break up with her boyfriend because he is moving away, and she hates life. I'm sure she would appreciate this. I'm sorely tempted to print it out; it seems to embody how she feels. Beautiful. I seem to use that line in a lot of reviews, but it fits so well. Lady Love |