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| Pluto's Rose 2007-03-23 ch 1, | "Ryan got a week suspension. But he cut himself before that week was up." I know that that's serious, and no one but me will think this, but... OMIGAWD I LOVE YOU! The story itself was very well written. The changes I made weren't there, though. That is all. ~Pluto |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2007-03-22 ch 1, | This is amazing. It's a great story, told in only a chapter! I love it. The bit about Ryan cutting himself and no one caring, well, that was weird. Too short. But I love it! (As I said before)The last line was so cute, and it explained the title. Let me know if you write anymore like this. I'd love to read it. |