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| Born Restless 2008-05-08 ch 1, | Hey, I liked this chapter. It was very sweet. However, it was hard to read.I think it would be easier if you spaced in between dialogue and shortened your paragraphs. |
| merrymowmow 2007-12-16 ch 9, | I was wondering when you're going to update? |