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Reviews For: Devil in the Details

Born Restless
2008-05-08
ch 1,
Hey, I liked this chapter. It was very sweet. However, it was hard to read.I think it would be easier if you spaced in between dialogue and shortened your paragraphs.
merrymowmow
2007-12-16
ch 9,
I was wondering when you're going to update?
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