OMD!(oh my dog clever eh?)
i dont know how you feel and i hope i never have to because i love my friends with all my heart! well i love this poem i cant beleive you wrote this it takes corage to write your feelings and you did it so claps for you*claps*
well keep smiling luv TeArS oF tHe HeArT

wow...i read all three of your works & ur rly talented. i am so sry 4 all the loss that u have suffered. if it makes u feel any bettr, u aren't alone.

my friend Linda (who i happened 2 be in Luv w/) was killed in february. she had been 14 for a lil over a month & one day her dad just...cracked...he strangled her mother with his bare hands in the morning & told his daughter she was sleping late. then when Linda came home he strangled her 2. he then killed himself with a kitchen knife. i have written a lot about her if u want to read it. read my poem 'all wounds get mending' i believe it mite help u.

i kno that the pain is very hard 2 deal w/ & the confusion & the fury. it is unbearable...torture. i loved linda w/ all my

This poem is so beautiful. I feel so sorry for your loss, your poem was so heart felt and meaningful. It seems to send your sorrow to the people reading it. Thankyou for making my day, thankyou.

Crimson this is beautifully written and i hope i see more of them i love our poetry already so have fun writing them and i hope that you get over your pain soon. Irishangel10290

Very powerful poem. The emotions come through well and it's true to any tragedy. You just keep asking yourself why, but you'll never get the answer. :(

This kind of creeped me out because it's written clearly and the words themselves are not exactly happy. It's a good sort of creeped out, though. I like it quite a bit.