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| swedishxsmelling 2007-06-21 ch 1, | thank you for the revieww :] your poems are so descriptive, i love it :] |
| asecretamor 2007-03-31 ch 1, | I find this poem really, alive. All that from a picture, thats incredible! |
| Coveredinblood11 2007-03-22 ch 1, | Nature is beautiful indeed. I liked the imagery put into this. A suggestion would be to add some metaphors just to spice this poem up a little more. |