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| Moondog Dozier 2007-04-12 ch 1,   | The pattern that you've created of starting with everyday language, then progressing to more elevated-poetic wording, and back to the everyday usage is wonderful. It connects with the reader in a specific way, and then opens up to more complex thought, then returns to the comfortable "scared shitless". This hits the reader at more than one level, which is what poetry should strive to accomplish. Excellent work. |
| a silenced revolution 2007-03-28 ch 1, | Well put. Interesing phrase, "what is well?". I like it. Keep writing. |