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| Elizabeth07 2008-01-01 ch 1, | I liked the concept of your story, but, I would have liked to see his jerky personality at first, mocking her, then, slowly, the atmosphere would change, and they would find themselves unable to resist each other. |
| MooseyLover 2007-05-23 ch 1, | m well that was good. cept i thought they didnt like eachh other and so yeah i was confused but yeah its god. =] ~Katiee. |
| Creme Brulee 2007-03-25 ch 1, | O-ooh. Ts. Hahaha. Nice. It's that one that u told us at the sleepover. YAY! lol. ok... um, well, since it's a oneshot, idk what to say. can't say keep going or anything. haha. ok. luv u! ur such a good writer. gosh. -CB |
| SithMouse 2007-03-23 ch 1, | I for one would be very interested in reading more about these two. Why's he such an ** and why do they hate each other? Great start though. Good as a oneshot too. :) |