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Reviews For: Ferris Wheel Kisses

Elizabeth07
2008-01-01
ch 1,
I liked the concept of your story, but, I would have liked to see his jerky personality at first, mocking her, then, slowly, the atmosphere would change, and they would find themselves unable to resist each other.
MooseyLover
2007-05-23
ch 1,
m well that was good. cept i thought they didnt like eachh other and so yeah i was confused but yeah its god. =]
~Katiee.
Creme Brulee
2007-03-25
ch 1,
O-ooh. Ts.
Hahaha.
Nice. It's that one that u told us at the sleepover. YAY!
lol. ok... um, well, since it's a oneshot, idk what to say. can't say keep going or anything. haha.
ok. luv u! ur such a good writer. gosh.
-CB
SithMouse
2007-03-23
ch 1,
I for one would be very interested in reading more about these two. Why's he such an ** and why do they hate each other? Great start though. Good as a oneshot too. :)
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