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| A.Annie.N 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Very...raw. Very honest. Nice. Annie |
| destinee's notebook 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason, this piece has a melancholy (urk, couldn't spell that) feel to it, especially towards the end. Maybe it's the best-friend/more-than sort of thing, I don't know, but I did like this. |
| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseThis oneshot was quite different. Though i was hoping for something more in the end, something more dramatic or angsty but your ending makes it much more realistic. I cant help but wonder what happens later on with these two, they seem pretty perfect for each other no? =] |
| iLoveFiction 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow so original, don't think I read something like it before...ever! I wish there was more but it's very good as a stand alone also. |
| Purple Muskrat 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseMy best friend literally said the same thing (the first bit, anyway) to me today, so this is kinda kismet. Now if only my friend and I weren't too dang prideful to actually talk about why we get PO'd at each other constantly, life would be grand. Great story! |
| chocolatechipash 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseaww i really like this, its cute. this isnt a one shot is it? how come you havent updated in ages i think its great! update soon mate. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI love this piece! Great job. I liked the dialogue. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| gulistanlik 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI was going to ask what this has to do with Romance but then I read your author's note. Hm. Underlying theme? As in our loved ones are the people who truly know our true self, or at least, mostly, but accept us anyway. They don't judge us. Am I right? Is that the underlying theme(s)? If so, I completely agree. Whether you like it or not, you have at least two masks; one reserved for the confines of your home, the other for your public life. Private and public. Gah, I feel like I'm lecturing. I better stop. Loved this fic! I especially loved that there was no physical romantic involvement yet there is romance present there, if we think about it or choose to accept that. Cool! Keep up the good work! gulistanlik |
| sweet vanilla mint 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseWow... brutally honest. :) I like this story. For some reason, it's different from the ones I've read before. Great job! :) |
| x3life 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseomg this one shot was so good!! it was really different, how they are usually about like love and cliches and i kinda expected them to like have some i love u thing in the end, and cuz they really were just best friends i think i enjoyed it more. =) |
| funsize 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusei wish people were really that honest.. or maybe i just dont have the right friends.. i reckon u should try to explore more writing like this.. its different than all your otherstuff but i reckkon its good |
| none of burt's beeswax 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abusesly. i like it. i think there is always something you hate a little about your best friend. and sometimes that hate makes you love them even more. |
| KT 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like it, it has really great undertones. KT |
| cbprice25 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Interesting to place it under Romance. It's like you're using those "underlying themes" as a third character. |
| calybe 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseOh...I loved the setting. And the characters are so well-written, I can just imagine them now. I think they're both enough for each other...in fact they might be so much more than enough for each other that it's overwhelming, so she tries to make more friends while he rather be alone. It was sweet nonetheless. One of my favourite pieces. |