Call me a stalker if you will (lol), but I've tracked down your FictionPress account! Heh, it really wasn't hard ... just clicking on a link, but ...

Anyway, this was really deep. I love the little oneshots like this. So much hope, so much emotion, so much feeling tucked into a couple pages of type. And it's really something to actually be able to see, actually be able to feel whatever the character is going through, and you always manage to capture that effect so perfectly.

The start of the letter was really descriptive, really building the setting. I especially love the questions. They bring a lot to the mood. The tone is just so hopeful, it's really moving.

And then the last half of the letter ties everything from past to present, y'know? Like asking ourselves about the discrimination in the world today, what we are currently doing to stop it. Once again, the hope in a time that most people would be hopeless, it's really touching. Never, ever stop writing.
~Jelly Bean

P.S. Totally random and irrevelent thought: this reminds me of something. I don't know if it's something that I wrote before or something I read before or what. Anyway, I really, really like this. It's just so touching and everything!

That was absolutely beautiful... and about a subject that's very close to my heart. To everyone's, I'd guess. I feel like crying, too.

Keep up the excellent work!

Barbara