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| sofa2016 2007-09-18 ch 1,  | abusepsh. you KNOW my hips don't lie. lol, again, i love it. cute little short stories make my day :D |
| Kelly Melly 2007-04-09 ch 3, | abusegood chap! update soon! Laters ~Kelly Melly |
| Kelly Melly 2007-03-25 ch 2, | abusehey, hey you updated!! good chap, very funny too! update again soon, Laters ~Kelly Melly |
| loz22 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great start! I loved and can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Kelly Melly 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abusei like this a lot! it's pretty good for a first chapter and the idea is great. hope you keep going with this because i'd like to see were it goes. Update soon, i can't wait! Laters ~Kelly Melly |
| Dreaming One 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuse*grins* I like it! A couple of tiny grammar issues, could use a quick scan in that regard, but the content itself is great! I like your characters, and I'm especially fond of poor Sofia because she's got my problem, lol. When I was in high school that's exactly what happened to me! I started losing weight and always had to squirm and fidget to keep my pants up. Plus, I share her plight regarding gargantu-hips. teehee. Girls with a figure suffer for it on the inside. I like Chris. He's got that I'm-cool-and-popular-but-I'm-smarter-and-nicer-than-the-average-bear thing going on. Good job! Update Soon! ~May |
| firstdreamer 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, good ideas. Hope to hear more! :-) |
| Imagined Insanity 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abusewow, this looks like a great story. i'll be sure to keep watching. |