Reviews for Tribute to Betty - FictionPress.com

Matthew James Current 2007-09-18 ch 1,	Beautiful, heartfelt work here. I have to say I am glad that you chose to include among your fictionpress pieces a longer poem. You have a very subtle, intentional, smooth way of writing. I am truly sorry for your loss, but this is a fitting and truly wonderful tribute. The emotions carries powerfully and clearly and the last two lines are excellent. Continue writing!
a silenced revolution 2007-05-04 ch 1,	Beautiful poem. I'm so sorry for your loss.
daughteroftherain 2007-04-25 ch 1,	so beautiful, and sad good job!
Miriam Doyle 2007-04-18 ch 1,	Very lovely indeed. All the words linked nicely with each other, not stumbling anywhere. I like the 'One star/Shining brighter than the rest/So full of life/and full of zest' line. It all adds to the dreamy, conversational style, like it was all a collection of thoughts that flowed with each other. Favourited!
xDancingintheRainx 2007-03-23 ch 1,	Very sweet. The flow works well for this piece. I really like the lines: "No matter how near No matter how far I carry you with me In the wink of a star" Lovely.