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Reviews For: I Like You, You Like Me, Now What?

aznqt09
2007-05-08
ch 1,
Hi!,

please don't discontinue this story!! I like it, the lack of repsonse might be because they want to see where it goes before they give their opinions. also maybe people are busy and don't have time to reply!

UPDATE!
shanasheart
2007-04-06
ch 2,
HEY sorry i was busy with work. *sweatdrop* so here i am...reviewingg...yayyayyayayay Sentences are a tad bit run on...and if i was blonde i might not catch on to some ideas...

Dont get me wrong...the cute little quirks are fun but too many is like... here...this is how ill explain it.

My name is sally. (not really) I go get my makeup done. Normally you pick one of the three higlights. Cheeks. Lips. Eyes.

you pick ONE to make you look Bam!

If you do all three you look a like a drag queen. Get the point?

ah well im off to review the next chapter. YAYAYAYAYAYAY

-The annoying reviewer...
preia
2007-04-06
ch 3,
i read it.. i am just not big on reviews.. so i vote you continue
Ana Ari
2007-04-06
ch 3,
I like the writing, it's descriptive and the dialog in this are realistic.
Cookie Jar
2007-04-04
ch 2,
Lol, how many links do you post on that youngwriters yahoo group? 3 or 4 at least.
spiking-cowgirl
2007-04-04
ch 3,
Please continue this story. It makes me smile, and we all need that in our day. I've always enjoyed the love-hate plotline, and I'm quite enjoying your take on it.
Etherelda
2007-04-04
ch 3,
Please don't discontinue this story...!
Hiromi
2007-04-03
ch 3,
I wouldn't say it was not an effective story. It's short, sweet, and quite unique. The background cast could use to be fleshed out a little, maybe supply a little more information about the day-to-day interaction and you did kind of jump into their life; that can be slightly disorienting. In other notes, some of the sentences can be a bit run-on, so watch for that.

It's very enjoyable, though. Keep writing.
Luv-TU
2007-04-03
ch 3,
I like it!!
M.D.Irvine
2007-04-01
ch 1,
yay! im glad u started a new story and are really pumped up about it. im already anticipating the first kiss with Jed and Zayrann. just a few spelling errors i caught, at the beginning think u meant "that's a wrap people" not rap and there was somewhere u wrote tre magnifique. im pretty sure its tres magnifique
hah but that stuff u can always correct later. im looking forward to see how this will go and hopefully u see it all the way through
tk care
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2007-03-31
ch 2,
aw
cuteness
Jed seems sweet in an **-ish way.
gotta love it.
and Zayra...
is that said how it's spelt?
so like zay-ra
or is it said somehow different?
coz i know someone how's name is like that, but not that.
different.
and i'm probably confusing you.
no matter
good chapter
liked it heaps
can't wait for another one!!

izzie
Etherelda
2007-03-30
ch 2,
Nice; hope you update soon...!
ArmedDoomMuffins
2007-03-29
ch 1,
I liked this very much. You write well. And i absolutely loved the 'bestest friend' part. It made me laugh ^^'
shanasheart
2007-03-23
ch 1,
Hey! Love how long this is. Love how u possibly have one grammar problem "i thinG i could get use to this." Elsewise amazing...one question for you though...normally sitcoms and so forth...dont they commonly end around the summer? not the school year? I might be wrong...i was just wondering...KEEP IT UP!!
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