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| riotmaker 2007-05-04 ch 1,   | i absolutely love this. scars have always been a beautiful thing to me and you express the pain they carry amazingly. ♥ |
| Ironic Presence 2007-03-26 ch 1, | Awesome beginning. Your take on an interesting view of scars. I like how you say you hate the fact that you can hurt... yet also, scars can be a sort of badge of honor. Third stanza--"sired" I think should be "seared". Love the last two lines of the third and last stanzas. You know, this is sort of Phantom of the Opera-esque... not quite, but in some ways... Good job. |