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riotmaker
2007-05-04
ch 1,
i absolutely love this.
scars have always been a beautiful thing to me and you express the pain they carry amazingly.

Ironic Presence
2007-03-26
ch 1,
Awesome beginning.
Your take on an interesting view of scars. I like how you say you hate the fact that you can hurt... yet also, scars can be a sort of badge of honor.
Third stanza--"sired" I think should be "seared".
Love the last two lines of the third and last stanzas.
You know, this is sort of Phantom of the Opera-esque... not quite, but in some ways... Good job.
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