Reviews for Loves Lays Bleeding

StarWonder09 2007-03-24 ch 1,	abuseI really like it. The imagery is amazing and conveys the feelings really well. Sorry about your boyfriend.
braggart 2007-03-23 ch 1,	abuseSorry about your breakup, but you wrote a nice poem! I really like this, actually. The imagery is great and you have a wonderful style, some really neat phrasing. "soft sunset sighs" is such a good line. Keep writing, I really enjoyed this!
Undead Serenade 2007-03-23 ch 1,	abuseThe first few lines have a very nice flow and pattern, then you go off in a bit of another style. Anyways, I like it because of the alliteration (adore alliteration!) and it's very easy conveying feelings to me and understanding in this piece. I'm sorry about your ex.