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| TeodoraKagome 2007-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseIt brought a smile to my face. I liked it! ~Teodora |
| LOSTxINSIDExMYxDREAMS 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuse:) makes you think...bravo |
| lygophobic lullabies 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, I think the word illmeaning just really stands out. The only thing I think you might want to change is the last word, I don't think it sounds right. |