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| braggart 2007-03-23 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this poem. The last two lines along with lines 9 and 10 are my favorite. You have a nice style and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. |
| lygophobic lullabies 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI think it was really nice, I like your words but I think a rhyme may have done good in this piece. Although it's fine without it. |