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Reviews For: Falling For Ear Noise

Jesse the Storyteller
2008-04-19
ch 1,
Hmm. Interesting little poem. I like the short, clipped phrases that make up the lines... I don't really understand what you mean by ear noise. I really like this stanza, though... it's the only stanza out of any of them that have something original to say: "Look for myself / In your mad labyrinth / Wandering in / The forest of done"

Although, that's not fair, because "You are the anti-sun" was original as well.

I like the general overall theme of falling for a guy who is so absolutely not worth your time but yet you can't get away even though you KNOW that it's stupid. I think most people have felt this.

-Jesse
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Twilight Starr
2007-10-21
ch 1,
Interesting song.

Good luck with songwriting and life.

Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~
wordsworth in a garbage can
2007-07-12
ch 1,
as a song, it's clever! lots of good phrases strung about.
bitterlyysweetchoco
2007-06-21
ch 1,
LOL I felt this way once. This would be a really good song.
I love the third and fifth stanza
rira-chan
2007-04-11
ch 1,
i really enjoyed this. good writing!


~rira-chan

P.s thanks for your reveiw
Raychel the Kiwi
2007-03-23
ch 1,
Ah. Falling for someone we really shouldn't. Boy, do I know that well. -sigh-

This was wonderful. It's rare to find a good non-rhyming poem. I know any poem I try to write comes out terrible, unless it rhymes.

-favorites-
darkling thrush
2007-03-23
ch 1,
i added this to my favorites! i don't know why, but it really struck me. and i guess kinda hit home, too. "falling for ear noise"--i love that. i know how it is to fall for someone you shouldn't...
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