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| failte200 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuselol - thanks for sharing the DISGUSTING symptoms of your disease, Mistress. God. :) Crusty ** indeed. I've had pinkeye, been there, done that. Thanks for bringing it all back. Jesus God. |
| magalina 2007-04-25 ch 1, | abuselol, I liked this one! Liked the last part :) see, I can`t review poems... |
| braggart 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThis poem seems like it's just having fun, which is cool. I really like the sense of humor. However, "signifying my weak state of being" seems out of place in the poem. It's too wordy or "signifying" is just too much when compared with everything else. |