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Reviews For: Your Burning Love

i.am.the.winter
2007-04-04
ch 1,
this...is good stuff, to say the least. the rhythm's very clear and the poem isn't repetitive - which is a good thing. some of the rhymes are a bit soft (survive/die, tongue/done) but i barely noticed...i was too lost in the rest of the poem. good work =)

-- i.am.the.winter

ps: thanks for the reviews/fave!! =)
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-03-24
ch 1,
I liked it. I'm glad that you managed (something I've seen others fail at) to avoid repeating yourself even though the poem had a few verses. It wasn't drabbleish or anything, it was good. You've got a great pen there.
The Reverse Edge Blade
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