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| polka dots and addictions 2007-03-30 ch 1,   | nice repetition in the beginning of each verse, the emotion is clear & forceful in this & i love the ending. |
| Jaeiyola 2007-03-25 ch 1, | That is a very beautiful piece. I was in a poetry mood and I am so glad I found your work. Amazing, can't wait to read more. |
| nectar in a sieve 2007-03-24 ch 1, | beautiful, honestly. longing, un-required love. gah. youve done a great job with this. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-03-24 ch 1, | Oh, that was nice! So much feeling and deep words! You described the emotions so well and made it so clear how you feel. Great job! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| nemivicious 2007-03-24 ch 1, | Sad, sad and beautiful. |