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| just a ray of sunshine 2007-03-24 ch 1,   | I must say, I really like the flow of this poem. Sometimes I just read poems and I'm like, Wow, that didn't work, but I love the way this is written. It's interesting, and usually it's very hard for me to see the hidden meaning in things, but I could clearly see it in this. There's real emotion in this, I think that's what makes it so good. My favorite line is, "They bleed such brilliant lies/ as they struggle to impress." That made me think. This is great! Keep writing, you have so much talent, I can see it even just in this. |