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| Spiralling Words 2007-12-15 ch 1,   | WOW. i liked this ALOT the rhyming just made it all better! well, i can't rhyme for my life so haha! anyways, loved this! Happy Writing and Reading! tears-i-have-shed |
| cassandra12271 2007-03-29 ch 1, | Cool twist. encore! |
| just a ray of sunshine 2007-03-25 ch 1, | I loved this. It's short, but you can hear the bitter tone it carries in the very first line. I loved how the last two lines were a twist on the last two lines of the play. We actually just finished reading Romeo and Juliet in my English class, and I have to say that your renditoin of it is very fun to read. It's funny how much emotion can be conveyed in those 4 lines. |
| nectar in a sieve 2007-03-24 ch 1, | intresting twist :] im intrested in reading some more stuff of yours this was incredibly well written |
| Complications 2007-03-24 ch 1, | very nice, short sweet simple and with beautiful imagry. |