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| little smiles 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseHehe, I enjoyed this a lot - it was a very "fun" read! Rather random, but I assure you that that's a good thing (well.. in my head at least). I didn't notice any problems with grammar, there were a couple of spelling mistakes but nothing major. So yes, I definitely liked it :) |