She's back!, i don't care that i've read these stories already, when(because you will, they're too good not to) you get these published, i'm buying them all

Booyah, Arra wins spectacularly! Great fight scene here, really well done, good pace, great descriptions and a class ending.

More confusion, woo! :P I still don't know if Ren is a goody or a baddy, although, methinks she's more a mix if anything, but whose side she's on is still confuddling me.
Oh and a Chimera, groovy. Go Arra!

these two chapters were great. i really loved the last chapter. keep up the great work adn writing.

Arra can do it!
Woot!
But Im still lost, I dont know who to trust anymore.

EVIL!

Im loving everything!

Woo, there loads more Arra to read after this?! Groovy. :D I', so confused right now though, I have no idea who's on Arra's side and who isn't...Hopefully it'll make more sense to me in the next chappy. Good chappy though.

YAy! Took u long enough. But Im glad your back. And please no more long breaks for months at a time:)

Yay, you're back and you brought Arra with you! :P She really does have a problem with her girp though doesn't she? And she really goes for the jewels every time, sucks to be her enemies. Groovy chapter and its good that your back, I've been wanting to know how this all turns out. :D

Royally in love with the story so far. I give it a 10 out of 10. Keep it up! ^_^

Amazing. Absolutely positively captivating. Update soon!

Wow, you were absent for so long - I feared something might have happened to you. It's a good thing you're back - I would have sent the CIA and FBI hunting for my favourite author of all time; I simply couldn't bear the thought of this story going unfinished ! It was a really good chapter - Edward has become really twisted in a way I had never imagined. It really perks up the suspense and fear for what is about to happen - all in all a definite A for the chapter.

I'm glad that you're finally going to publish your book - a tiny request - could you publish it in Malaysia as well ? I'm from around that area and I was hoping I could snag a copy for myself - this story is too good to pass up. Make sure you DELETE everything that you want to publish from fictionpress - there are people over the internet who can publish it and attain your rightful fame and glory - that's one main reason I never posted my original works on this site.

Well, good luck at work and my well wishes on wrangling a publisher ! Be sure to alert me when your book comes out !

~Jo

OMG!
WHY!WHY!
WHY did u turn him! I never thought u would do it. I didnt want u to do it. I love the story though.
Edward=weretiger
never saw it coming.
Wat else do u have up ur sevle? I dont think i can take anymore?
Tell me pleaes... is Edward going to be in the next and last story?

I like the poem...and it's a good chapter. Hope the next one comes soon. Agh...I got to go...but update soon, please. =)

Sincerely, H.P. Farmer

PS Good luck with the publishing...it should be published. It's really good.