 padfootblack15 2007-03-25 . chapter 1First review...I think.
Yayy. Good job, it's really good. I like the emotions you capture and the way you're integrated flashbacks-ish in without stating that they are flashbacks. Hope that made sense.
Anywayss amazing job. It's really good. Wow, I kinda just repeated myself. Update soon, although I do understand if you don't.
Seriously your writing amazes me, especially the dialogue. I tend to make people sound horribly out of character in dialogue, but you have it down.
AMAZING!! |