Oh, I really enjoyed this. I wish that it could be put to music.

Absolutely stunning.

The words flow so perfectly, I wish badly I had some music so I could sing it. And that I knew more about what's going on in these lyrics, they make me curious. Sad, but very beautiful.

-Kanilla

I love this poem! :)

The concept...the wording...I really love the third stanza. I'd like to have more background knowledge, but it gives me enough information to let me wonder, anyways.

I actually read this before but never reviewed it...*slaps self*. Woops. Hehe. Off to read (and review?) more.

Toodles!

Good :) It's really short in my opinion and more of a background would be nice, but I loved the wording!

I've read a lot of your stuff and it's all awesome. I love the way the words flow and the beat when you read it aloud. Wish i had some music to put behind it.