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| Apnoea 2008-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseAw, that was so sweet. I wish there was more. :) |
| TheyCallMeCyclone 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusethat was really cute. at first i thought that he had taken the camera and taken a picture or gadriel's slacked jaw expression[: |
| Ramliel 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseAh! No! I wanted to read more! It was getting really good. I think you should make this into a story. I would love to read it. Goodness you have such talent. ^_^ I would love to be able to write the way you do. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseaww! that was cute! adorable! i loved it! really sweet. |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. :) Gabriel's characterization was great, especially the way you portrayed him as shy and flinching when Daniel got too close. Nice one-shot. :D |
| Shaitanah 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet! ;) Good story. |
| Error-Author 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAh, fluff. I'm currently looking into medication to combat my severe fluff obsession. And yay for Malexmale! Ha, all my romance ends up malexmale. XD Perhaps the story might have benefited from a little more character description? I think people would bond more to your characters if you described them physically a bit more. :) just a suggestion though ^.^ Oh, and homophobia (and just bullying in general, actually) is a horrible concept. I love supporting gay rights ^.^ Cheers and thanks for the fluff! It was appreciated! |