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| notauseryetxD 2008-10-21 ch 1,  | aww!! I'm so glad the ending was happy! great writing! |
| kitty003 2008-09-15 ch 1,  | aw, this is a cute but short story. i really think that you should go on with it, if thats possible. |
| legodaynuhxx 2008-08-20 ch 1, | Eh. I liked where it was going. I thought it was pretty cute and realistic and wow, a stalker, really? But then, it all went so fast. What happened to the virgin dates? No kissing on the first date. And man, this guy's been stalking you for who knows how long and all that happens is "I like you" and major make-out session? To be honest, I really wish the second half, the confrontation, had been a little longer, if you understood my rant. That really was just a rant, nothing against you personally. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. Drama always feels like a soap opera. And who doesn't love a slashy soap? :) Favorite line: He wished with all his might that his voice actually take his side for once and not cause him humiliation at every moment it got. Cracked me up! ;D Great job! -Dana. |
| Apnoea 2008-06-14 ch 1, | Aw, that was so sweet. I wish there was more. :) |
| TheyCallMeCyclone 2008-06-07 ch 1, | that was really cute. at first i thought that he had taken the camera and taken a picture or gadriel's slacked jaw expression[: |
| Ramliel 2008-06-06 ch 1, | Ah! No! I wanted to read more! It was getting really good. I think you should make this into a story. I would love to read it. Goodness you have such talent. ^_^ I would love to be able to write the way you do. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-04-05 ch 1, | aww! that was cute! adorable! i loved it! really sweet. |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-07-10 ch 1, | I liked this. :) Gabriel's characterization was great, especially the way you portrayed him as shy and flinching when Daniel got too close. Nice one-shot. :D |
| Shaitanah 2007-05-27 ch 1, | That was sweet! ;) Good story. |
| Error-Author 2007-03-29 ch 1, | Ah, fluff. I'm currently looking into medication to combat my severe fluff obsession. And yay for Malexmale! Ha, all my romance ends up malexmale. XD Perhaps the story might have benefited from a little more character description? I think people would bond more to your characters if you described them physically a bit more. :) just a suggestion though ^.^ Oh, and homophobia (and just bullying in general, actually) is a horrible concept. I love supporting gay rights ^.^ Cheers and thanks for the fluff! It was appreciated! |