Reviews for Who Would Miss You?

Zigeunerin
2007-03-25
ch 1,

Wonderfully done, I think. I love all things by Ian Fleming, and I liked this just as well. My only complaint would be some missing commas that would have made the sentence structure easier to understand here and there. But that could just be the personal preference of someone who drowns everything they write in commas...Do you plan on continuing with the story or just abandoning it? I'd read more if given the opportunity.

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