Very nice! I really liked it. I could tell. It shows so much even though it's short. Nice work :)

Hey,
great job, I read it...ha ha...I told ya I'd get around to reading it sooner or later. I'm guessing the emotion was love, I don't know it just sounds right to me the way you wrote the short story.
But for some reason I kept thinking of one person when you said "T set my standards high. Hers were lower."...I know you'd be made at me if I said who I was thinking of when you wrote that...and it wasn't me I was thinking of and not you either.
Well I'll see ya later... Have fun in London and Rome!
Sapphire

aw, that was sweet. So true too- well, it is in a way to me. o_O lovely. nice job kristin :D