Lots of imagery, and very passionate. I think I have trouble injecting passion into my poems, so I am humbled when I see it done so flawlessly, and I'm being sincere when I say that.

-Ramen

I got a chance to read all your peoms (It feels good to be back) and they all rocked and were all beautiful and awsome.

Maggot.

Alright good stuff. 'But who says Fate has already spoken?
They say rules were made to be broken...' Great line.

Maggot.

I like it alot, and may love forever bless you.

Maggot.

Oh my goodness. This was absolutely spectacular. In the middle, I actually started tearing up alittle because it reminded me of this guy that I really liked. We don't talk anymore, but I'm still not over him. This is probably my favorite of all of your poems. Someday, I want to write poems just as great as yours.

Keep writing!

-Sapphire:)

It's official...I'm jealous. You're so good at writing poetry and getting your feelings across. I liked this a lot.

~Sapphire