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| SiriGrohl13 2007-05-01 ch 1, | Hm...interesting...good |
| Nemonus 2007-03-29 ch 1, | "Happy, that everyone shares/All of the doom" lol! That's a great line. I like the suggestion of a someone behind the "apocalypse", but you need to work on making the poem work better with its punctuation and capitalizations. |