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| N.M.E 2008-06-22 ch 15,  | abuseI LOVE THIS FIC! It's amazing and thrilling! I enjoy it a lot. Please update soon. |
| angel4evaxxxxx 2008-06-20 ch 15, | abuseYEY! A new chapter. It was different to how I expected it, but YES! Jesse is alive thank god. I think you were right not to give her a name though for the reasons you stated. I think, in reality to the situation, and also, because of Jesse's character, he just wouldn't really want to know, even if he wasn't hurt. I hope the next chapter is up soon though, I understand why it might be longer. I've just started my summer and I still don't have time to write lol! ANyway. Can't wait to read more. Update soon. |
| WriterGurl123 2008-06-19 ch 15, | abuseI'm glad that you posted more. I'm glad that he's not dead because I love Jesse. This little girl just seems like an angel sent from heaven in a thirteen year-old girl's form. Love it! |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-06-19 ch 15, | abuseyes hes alive. haha i had a feeling he was. but i was still scared. now all he has to do is save Riley. update soon! |
| Masked Mystery 2008-05-05 ch 14, | abuseI've been reading this story for awhile, I really like it! Keep it up! The chapter sounded realistic, it didn't suck. |
| Shelby 2008-04-22 ch 14, anon. | abuseHey. i think jesse is living. i am pretty sure he is. i read you authors note and you said.. "Mainly because Jesse’s the greatest thing to ever come out of my mind and I don’t want to lose him. What about you guys?" haha.. i dont wanna lose him :) i hope he is alive! |
| Jesus Loves 2008-04-21 ch 14, | abuseJesse can't go bye bye :( |
| WriterGurl123 2008-04-21 ch 14, | abuseI don't want Jesse to die. I'm hoping that he isn't and for some god forsaken miracle, he's going to be alright and he's going to help Riley out. The one thing I don't get is why the doctor is doing a test on her. Is she in that bad of shape that she needs to be tested. Did they give her something, that's making her sick? I'm a bit confused about that. Post More Soon! |
| not.a.spoiled.brat 2008-04-21 ch 14, anon. | abusewell to start off, this chapter wasnt that bad. aw i hope jesse isnt really dead and they have a heart to take him to the hospital.poor riley.theyre too cruel to her! >=/ well im so prettysure that jesse has been and will b my favorite character!come back!he has too...please update soon =] |
| angel4evaxxxxx 2008-04-21 ch 14, | abuseAh...I so wanted to cry...Such a good chapter. I wonder where this is going and what could possibly happen. Can't wait got the next chapter. I hope Jesse isn't dead! |
| JD Allen 2008-04-07 ch 13, | abuseI kind of like Jesse's evil side. It's not only useful in this circumstance but kind of hot! :) Can't wait for the next update! -JD Allen |
| WriterGurl123 2008-04-07 ch 13, | abuseI hope he's not dead, and I hope Riley is alright. Post More Soon! |
| Jesus Loves 2008-04-06 ch 13, | abuseOMG updat soon PLEASE |
| angel4evaxxxxx 2008-04-05 ch 13, | abuseARGH! You put it on a cliffhanger! ARGH! Please write the next chapter really quickly and post. Or even better tell me you've written it already and are going to post it soon! ARGH! I'm going to have to wait! |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-04-05 ch 13, | abuseWHAT. he.cant.die. he just cant. Hes prob faking.. i hope :/ but yess update sooner!! i love this story! |