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| kool-aidrocks2008 2008-11-19 ch 1,   | i just ran across this and i gotta say, i loved it |
| lxlanimefreaklxl 2008-09-06 ch 41, | so i recently found out that this story is completed and started reading it. and finished it. all in one seating. =] i have to say, very intresting and amusing story! really enjoyed it. even your fillers kicked ass. all and all, really loved it! |
| proto tomy hema 2008-07-26 ch 1, | Hi, Sammy its Sarah...You told me to review so I review..This story is the shit...yay!...Is that too "OMG gooshy" fo you?...if so...too bad...lol.. |
| Navaura 2008-07-12 ch 23, | Reading that made me blush. Maybe you should write a story about Jason and the Emo dude. It'd be cute. Jason seems like a cutey pie, but i got tibbs on Kevin, that boy seems like he's too hot! Too bad he's not down with black girls. |
| Navaura 2008-07-12 ch 5, | Rae's a chick with serious issues. I feel bad for Emily. |
| Navaura 2008-07-12 ch 3, | In the second chapter when rae walked into the diner it was pretty clear that she came in. Discription and her name was given when it was said that she had to go to the diner to get emily. I like this, your characters are hilarious. I'll be surprised if no one gets fired. very good work. |
| bestnameonthesite 2008-06-12 ch 41, | Man, you sre awesome! I wasn't sure whether to root for EmilyTessa or EmilyRae. I wanted a threesome but you got it right to my satisfaction anyways. Write more! |
| Omok 2008-05-30 ch 41, | Lol wow~ amusing story! xD lol, i finished all that in like two hours? xD well, yeah! great/funny/amusing xD =) |
| RandomReviewer 2008-05-15 ch 1, | Hey, it's a pretty good story but I don't know. It kind of reminds me of the movie Waiting which well, was about a restaurant who did mess with people foods, and it was pretty identical. Maybe you should change that one part since it was basically the same thing they did. Originality is key. Don't get me wrong though, it's good. |
| Zoromaru 2008-03-26 ch 8, | I now have a newfound respect for people who handle my food. |
| Lonesome Bird 2008-03-20 ch 41, | Haha, the end was so cute. I really enjoyed this story, it gave me a lot of laughs when I really needed them. I'm sad to see it end. Thank you for the shout out in the opening note, and I can't wait for any future stories you post! -LB |
| Lonesome Bird 2008-03-20 ch 40, | Good god, they finally said it. xD I really like Rae's little monologue, it's really sweet. -LB |
| Bingster 2008-03-20 ch 41, | WOW! This was so very, very awesome! Wonderful ending~! |
| Steph :] 2008-03-15 ch 41, | i can't believe it's finally over :O a brilliant ending, though. :] |
| Slumming.it.with.Johnny 2008-03-15 ch 41, | ITS OVER! WHY?! Hehe it was a GREAT story and a lovely ending. I hope to see more stories like this! |