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| Fae Caspian 2007-03-30 ch 1,   | I usually really dislike poetry, especially this really short line style you use in this poem. I also really usually hate emo-y things. Regardless I really liked your poem, I liked your use of rhyme. I also really liked the line about seizing the day and about winning. I really liked the last line too. I just really liked your poem and I definitely DEFINITELY sympathize. |
| madi.ao 2007-03-29 ch 1, | brilliant. thats all i can think to describe it. brilliant |
| The Simple 2007-03-29 ch 1, | Pretty good^.^ |
| Creative Jenius 2007-03-29 ch 1, | It's short, and sweet, but I like it (: |
| Pandaemonic Paradigm 2007-03-28 ch 1, | I like your use of reduplicated words. It's pretty cool sounding. I especially like 'Seize the day. / That you did / That you do" |
| AmenKitty 2007-03-28 ch 1, | I like it since it's something everyone goes through. Hope you feel better and chin up, there is someone out there for you. You just have to keep looking or let him come to you. Not sure if that makes sense to yuo but I hope it did^_^ |
| rockNrollROMANTIC 2007-03-27 ch 1, | thats so sad that the guy you like got a girl friend and it wasent u!=( Ihave a few ?'s though... 1>Did u tell him ur feelings? 2>Dose he even know you exist? **Im only asking because (through my many relationships)ive found that (sadly) heart break and despair are more inspiring than joy and happyness |
| Anahid Hartoonian 2007-03-27 ch 1, | M don't you hate the game that must be played? I do too. Until another day, as always. |
| Neteri Bennu 2007-03-27 ch 1, | I like it. |