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| Bright Green 2007-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseI like your style - really simple, but interesting. |
| tesa131313 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI lurve it! Simple but some thing to ponder about. Like someones crazy ass dream. It sounds like dr. suess in a good way |
| Xriny 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseyou remind me alot of one of my friends. his FP name is 'i eat poetry for breakfast' well this week at least, who knows when he'll change it again -_- hehe well i liked it, it's kinda like a little kid song/book lol or something by Dr. Suse XP |
| PocoSnow15 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really cool! Very original! I know, dots are so simple...but so...I don't know! Very cool! Awesome job! |
| braindead1345 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abusei like this! its so..wimisical! i dunno but its cute... |
| effervescent-sentiments 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abuseCute. Reminded me of Dr. Seuss... not the effect you were going for? Oh, well. :) Nice work. -Dev. |
| cloudxtears 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abusehaha rad. |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAbstractly visual, and interestingly open for interpretation. Very thought provoking. Good work. |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseCute. ^^ Rowan. |
| Neteri Bennu 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuse"no on should ever know"... on should be one. ~Neteri Bennu |
| aridelaine 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is fun and different...sorry just had to put the dots in. Overall it made me think of a riddle that I cannot figure out the answer too. Keep writing! |
| Summerdazed 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abusethis short poem is like a riddle with no answer. it innocently teases you like a child. lovely. review me if you're free :O) =summerdazed= |
| NerwenElensar 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseHI! the poem is kina weird but i love weird things especially when someone tries to write a differnt poem. And i have to say yxou did a great job. And i know about the dots, the are really, well like the poem: weird! Greetz Nerwen |
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseI hope there was no meaning behind this before I say it. But it sounds like a cute poem for small children. Maybe with some illustration, like Dr.Seuss almost. ♥ Erica Sky |
| LessThanMemorie 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abusei like it:) |