|Reviews for DOTS|
| Bright Green 8/19/07 . chapter 1
I like your style - really simple, but interesting.
| tesa131313 6/19/07 . chapter 1
I lurve it!
Simple but some thing to ponder about.
Like someones crazy ass dream.
It sounds like dr. suess in a good way
| Xriny 4/24/07 . chapter 1
you remind me alot of one of my friends. his FP name is 'i eat poetry for breakfast' well this week at least, who knows when he'll change it again -_- hehe well i liked it, it's kinda like a little kid song/book lol or something by Dr. Suse XP
| PocoSnow15 4/7/07 . chapter 1
Wow, that was really cool! Very original! I know, dots are so simple...but so...I don't know! Very cool! Awesome job!
| braindead1345 3/31/07 . chapter 1
i like this! its so..wimisical! i dunno but its cute...
| effervescent-sentiments 3/28/07 . chapter 1
Cute. Reminded me of Dr. Seuss... not the effect you were going for? Oh, well. :) Nice work.
| cloudxtears 3/28/07 . chapter 1
| Moondog Dozier 3/27/07 . chapter 1
Abstractly visual, and interestingly open for interpretation. Very thought provoking. Good work.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 3/27/07 . chapter 1
| Neteri Bennu 3/27/07 . chapter 1
"no on should ever know"... on should be one.
| aridelaine 3/27/07 . chapter 1
This poem is fun and different...sorry just had to put the dots in. Overall it made me think of a riddle that I cannot figure out the answer too. Keep writing!
| Summerdazed 3/26/07 . chapter 1
this short poem is like a riddle with no answer. it innocently teases you like a child. lovely.
review me if you're free :O)
| NerwenElensar 3/26/07 . chapter 1
the poem is kina weird but i love weird things especially when someone tries to write a differnt poem. And i have to say yxou did a great job. And i know about the dots, the are really, well like the poem: weird!
| Toxic.Industrial.Waste 3/26/07 . chapter 1
I hope there was no meaning behind this before I say it.
But it sounds like a cute poem for small children.
Maybe with some illustration, like almost.
| Swallowed.Hope 3/25/07 . chapter 1
i like it:)