I like the nostalgic, reflective quality this piece has to it. I also thought you kept the poem honest and sincere, which is a great thing. Nice work!

Wow, really sweet. Gentle and very meaningful, it's awesome. Good job :)

I think we live the same life... Crazy. While I was reading this, one line from a song kept coming to me "The flames can get you

stirred, but it's the cold that leaves you shaken." I know that feeling of despair when he cuts you out, and yet you still smile at the memories of that night, and when you lay your head down you live it all over again. People who say they forget, or let it go didn't have anything worth treasuring to begin with because I see it more vividly and draw on the feelings I felt then to make it through another day. Thank you for sharing. *Ash*

The rain is poetry within itself. I have a brother named Chris.

SirScott

Aw, sweet.

One day, hopefully, I'll find someone who means as much to me.

I updated. Go look.

Rowan.