Reviews for Demonia Intro Vol1

Bloodstained Hurricane 2008-05-27 ch 1,	Nice introduction, description. But it doesn't feel as if it has a point, maybe it shoulder be longer or more detailed within explaining the situation. The description is nice, but if doesn't have a point or direction to where exactly the reader is going, confusion can happen quickly. What is the Demonia Intro? What is the main point of the story? I can't get that from this.
xXxMoonlitexXx 2007-03-27 ch 1,	now that was orgamisic it was awesome told ya it was good