Wow, again, beautiful. And I know I say that every one I review is amazing, but it's true. I love your writing, and I love this piece. It's so... blissful.

I really loved your writing style in this poem, my favorite part was the Eden line, because Eden like many other things cn be heaven or deadly. I read it over and over each time getting a new perspective.

Keep writing

and

Best of luck,

Surreal

You have a knack of powerful imagery. This is an interesting poem with some clever ideas, and I enjoyed reading it more than once. My only critique of this is that line breaks could be used to make it even more effective, separating ideas.

Beautiful work, truly.

another good one, this can be interpreted in different ways. and again great last line, really reinforces the first stranza. loved it!

I imagine these words as the lyrics to a Loreena McKennitt song.

Beautiful imagery. Well done. Only one teeny-tiny criticism : some of the lines had too many syllables that broke the flow a bit. Other than that I really liked it, and the flow is otherwise lovely. And thanks for the review. :)

I love your imagery here and the longing expressed here. I also like how you've separated the last line from the rest. It makes your final line seem more...profound in a way.

Well, my internet connection is back up and working so . . . I guess I'm back too! Anyway.

This piece is wonderful! I know I've probably said the same thing in every review, but your work is really . . . inspiring. It's great. ;)

Kt

this was really pretty tiff. I loved it. Miss you bunches and so does Kayla. Hope to hear from you soon. 9/10

Love Brandon