|Reviews for The Meadow Dream|
| Rooster Skull 1/25/08 . chapter 1
Wow, again, beautiful. And I know I say that every one I review is amazing, but it's true. I love your writing, and I love this piece. It's so... blissful.
| surrealphobia 4/16/07 . chapter 1
I really loved your writing style in this poem, my favorite part was the Eden line, because Eden like many other things cn be heaven or deadly. I read it over and over each time getting a new perspective.
Best of luck,
| Fawkes Ravenwood 4/5/07 . chapter 1
You have a knack of powerful imagery. This is an interesting poem with some clever ideas, and I enjoyed reading it more than once. My only critique of this is that line breaks could be used to make it even more effective, separating ideas.
| Matthew James Current 4/5/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful work, truly.
| bangbangstartagain 4/4/07 . chapter 1
another good one, this can be interpreted in different ways. and again great last line, really reinforces the first stranza. loved it!
| L-Lilith 4/4/07 . chapter 1
I imagine these words as the lyrics to a Loreena McKennitt song.
| zz00 4/4/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery. Well done. Only one teeny-tiny criticism : some of the lines had too many syllables that broke the flow a bit. Other than that I really liked it, and the flow is otherwise lovely. And thanks for the review. :)
| ChildeOfChaos 4/4/07 . chapter 1
I love your imagery here and the longing expressed here. I also like how you've separated the last line from the rest. It makes your final line seem more...profound in a way.
| exit laughing 3/29/07 . chapter 1
Well, my internet connection is back up and working so . . . I guess I'm back too! Anyway.
This piece is wonderful! I know I've probably said the same thing in every review, but your work is really . . . inspiring. It's great. ;)
| TK Halliwell 3/26/07 . chapter 1
this was really pretty tiff. I loved it. Miss you bunches and so does Kayla. Hope to hear from you soon. 9/10