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| Grape 2008-07-24 ch 24, | abuseI just started this story, or did I finish it? Anyways, I really like it so far, actually...I LOVE IT!! I can't wait for the next update!! |
| Initially loaded 2008-07-21 ch 24, | abusewOW. This has got more and more entertaining... |
| miss-ellen 2008-07-21 ch 21, anon. | abuseI miss those wonderful little silver coins! :'( and 5c lollies... 3 for 20c? it's just not called for! Hehehe, I'm loving how evil Kara and Jay are... beating each other up while making it look lovey-dovey, classic (and really, what's better than people in denial about liking each other, pretending to hate each other while pretending to like each other?) Very much enjoyed :) |
| KEANA 2008-07-18 ch 24, anon. | abuseWOW I LIKE JUST READ THE WHOLE STORY AND IT WAS LIKE AWESOME yOU TOTALLY DESRVE A LIKE GRAMMY OR SOMETHING WELL PLEASE WRITE MORE IM GOING TO GO CHECK OUT SOME MORE OF YOUR STORIES! |
| Dipped in Blue 2008-07-18 ch 24, | abuseJay totally likes Kara : ) I can't wait for Kara to realize her feelings, though! |
| Dipped in Blue 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat first chapter. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapter later : ) |
| Elizabeth Wonders 2008-07-16 ch 24, | abuseI love this story! Kara is the best, I love all the facts that she comes up with. Burr is pretty sweet, I know someone a lot like him. Keep it up! |
| loveroffiction 2008-07-15 ch 24, | abuseHeya! I LOVE your story! So quirky! So humerous! There is one thing that was a little confusing though: '...the water had to be at least 30 degrees Celsius Fahrenheit...it might have been colder.' 30 degrees Celsius is pretty warm - is that what you meant to write? Anyways, looking forward to the next installment, N@. |
| contraband fairy 2008-07-15 ch 24, | abuseHey! Loved the chapter! Kara is awesome as per usual, and I'm loving the way you're developing her and Jay's feelings for each other. Jay's dad is a total dick! I much prefer Kara's mom... though perhaps a little more difficult to deal with; at least she cares. Loved Jay's line about planning to assasinate Robert Mugabe... go Jay! Perhaps I'm one of the many bazillions of people who do; but I really wish someone would assasinate him. What I want to know is why it's always the good guys who get assasinated? I swear I have a personal grudge... I've a heap of friends from Zim and the dude claims to be Catholic! I mean of all the BS claims! Okay... Ash will now cut off her Mugabe rant as it is completely pointless... loved the end hug and all the awkward kara/Jay interaction, it was really awesome! Oh... and Erin is the bomb! Seriously I love that girl... you should do like, a seperate thing on her and Burr (because Burr is... there isn't really a word, he's just very Burr-ily Burr. That doesn't make too much sense does it? Oh well) Anyway as I was saying, you could totally do a Burr/Erin story... oh, it could be a prelude, like Star Wars except not so sucky! Please, please?! Okay... so i'm gonna go read ACC now, feel free to ignore all of the above since i know you're really busy and I shouldn't be encouraging people to start new projects when I can barely find time to update my own. Cheerio and come back soon Ashlyn |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-14 ch 24, | abuseNice addition. I like all the facts and dialogue. Good job! Keep writing. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Mitchy 2008-07-12 ch 7, | abuseim glad to have found this story, its been a while since i've had a good read. Ü |
| Magickaleyez 2008-07-11 ch 24, | abuseHa that was great and I SO loved the way you happened to throw in that chicken fact too!! I remember reading about it a few months ago!! hehe that was great :-) Love your story as always and once again will be made (reluctantly) to wait until another chapter is posted. I can't get enough of these characters absolutely fantastically delightful!! Keep up the great work, I hope this story doesn't come to an end anytime soon I dunno what I would do! lol Thanks girl! |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-07-10 ch 24, | abuseLOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! |
| Sarahj259 2008-07-09 ch 24, | abuseGreat Chapterness! |
| Ink 2008-07-09 ch 24, anon. | abuseYou updated! Yay! :D |